1. Length (no less tan ten lines and no more tan fifteen ) It was much longer than requested, but you were very punctual and responsible…………………………………………………..…. 20 /20 2. Grammar………………………………………………..………………………………………………………………..15 /20 3. Spelling…………………………...………………………………………………………………………………………..10 /15 4. Pictures (1-5). Beautiful pictures……………………………………………………………………………. 15 /15 5. Punctuality (May 3rd).Very punctual. Congratulations………………………………………….... 10/10 6. Content (about a travel you have had) Yours was rather a work experience blog, but that was O.K.………………………………………………………………………………..………………………………… 20 /20 Total…………………………………………………………………………………………………………………… 90 /100 Grade: 90 Grammar Corrections:
One of the tasks I had to tackle was to search for new strategies, techniques and methods to help one of my pupils in first grade who had an aggressive behavior. (There is no need for that hyphen after the aggressive word). For instance, (You needed a comma after instance. That’s rather a punctuation mistake.) let alone participating in the daily teaching and learning activities. (What do you mean by that, Rusbeth?) Besides, he used cry the whole morning at school. (You should have skipped some words I skipped here). There were times when I felt very frustrated… this kid´s aggressive behavior… low - level - kids the first week turned out to be…(The word during should have been skipped). to teach the kids well. my misbehaved student group, since he had (A comma after group was needed) beginning, (comma after beginning) Accustomed to a trouble maker (student should be skipped) I could accomplish (I, not and)
Spelling Corrections:
aggressive not (On the sixth line, hot was a typo). on the mood distracted during appropriate the (typo) made (typo) beginning
Final Comments: Beautiful and interesting story. Your lexicon is good. Pay more attention to word spelling and grammar.
Travel Blog Grading Criteria
ResponderEliminar1. Length (no less tan ten lines and no more tan fifteen ) It was much longer than requested, but you were very punctual and responsible…………………………………………………..…. 20 /20
2. Grammar………………………………………………..………………………………………………………………..15 /20
3. Spelling…………………………...………………………………………………………………………………………..10 /15
4. Pictures (1-5). Beautiful pictures……………………………………………………………………………. 15 /15
5. Punctuality (May 3rd).Very punctual. Congratulations………………………………………….... 10/10
6. Content (about a travel you have had) Yours was rather a work experience blog, but that was O.K.………………………………………………………………………………..………………………………… 20 /20
Total…………………………………………………………………………………………………………………… 90 /100
Grade: 90
Grammar Corrections:
One of the tasks I had to tackle was to search for new strategies, techniques and methods to help one of my pupils in first grade who had an aggressive behavior. (There is no need for that hyphen after the aggressive word).
For instance, (You needed a comma after instance. That’s rather a punctuation mistake.)
let alone participating in the daily teaching and learning activities. (What do you mean by that, Rusbeth?)
Besides, he used cry the whole morning at school. (You should have skipped some words I skipped here).
There were times when I felt very frustrated…
this kid´s aggressive behavior…
low - level - kids
the first week turned out to be…(The word during should have been skipped).
to teach the kids well.
my misbehaved student
group, since he had (A comma after group was needed)
beginning, (comma after beginning)
Accustomed to
a trouble maker (student should be skipped)
I could accomplish (I, not and)
Spelling Corrections:
aggressive
not (On the sixth line, hot was a typo).
on the mood
distracted
during
appropriate
the (typo)
made (typo)
beginning
Final Comments:
Beautiful and interesting story. Your lexicon is good. Pay more attention to word spelling and grammar.